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To all YWS users: Jalmoc has posted this story before. I am the real author of this short story. Please do not think that this is plagiarism!! Thank you :) ...

This short story is really... magical. I've been a huge fan of magic ever since Harry Potter came out. Nothing that I can nit-pick about, since everyone else did it ...

Howdy, Wesley!! :D First things first, great poem. I remember you typing this in English Honors. Anyways, I don't have anything to nit-pick about, so keep writing those amazing stories.

This has a nice rhythm to it. Keep it up!!!

Question!!! Is this a Poem or a story. Just wondering.

This is way to short to be a novel. This is a short story. Just giving you a heads up the next time you want to create another story. Other ...

Hey, Wes, you finally finished this amazing story. Not much to nit-pick about. Keep it up! :D

I must admit, great song. If you put a good beat with it, it sounds like an actual band could play this. Keep it up!! :D

Well, so-far-so-good. Drowning is my worst fear. If I hear on the news that a person drowned or a person died by dry-drowning. Either Way, keep writing. :D

I really like these lyrics. I, myself, am a songwriter. The lyrics you have posted have a smooth, flowing rhythm inside it. Keep it up. You are doing great :D

Welcome To YWS!! :D

I really like this short story. You should really make a sequel to this. Keep writing, please!!

I was always a huge fan of Jurassic Park, even now I still am. Not many things to nit-pick about, but I think all of us would like more visual ...

Hey I have these books and I really love them. I mean not many people care about writing, especially about cats. People just pass through the day, not htinking about ...

Like Jalmoc said, I have read this story in my Enlish Book. Me and Jalmoc are in the same class and we had to read this story the first week ...