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Re: avalanche of time
I really love the way that you artfully placed the lines of poetry! The poem really creates a vivid picture. Although some of the words were spelled wrong, like "Floe" ...
Jun 5, 2020 -
Re: You are Not a Part of Me
This is a very emotional poem, and uses metaphors extremely well. I Definitely felt that you did a great job wrapping up everything at the end. My favorite part was ...
Jun 3, 2020 -
Re: The Fool
"He stared at me. His eyes gleamed with certainty His wings golden- with no misuse of detail." I love this introduction. It really sets up the tone for the poem, ...
Jun 3, 2020 -
Re: The Stirrings
This is more of an intro to the main theme of the story. Enjoy!
Jun 3, 2020 -
Re: The Hourglass
Beautiful imagery!
Jun 3, 2020 -
Re: Squirming Worms | Poem
This piece does a fantastic job balancing the physical with the mental, and the struggle which ensues. I loved it, and hope to see more amazing poetry.
Jun 3, 2020 -
Re: The sound in the dark Chap 1
Hey, potter4life! This is a very intriguing beginning to your story, and I am excited to read the rest of it! There are a couple of things that you can ...
Jun 3, 2020