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  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Between the raindrops on my window

    Remington38 here to reveiw your writing! Wow is the first thing I have to say, just wow. I absolutely loved this story and the first paragraph alone sucked me into ...

    Jul 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Pain

    Hello Remington38 here to reveiw your amazing poem! I loved this poem and found it beautiful and moving. It was motivational towards the end and very personal but at the ...

    Jul 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Spilled

    Hello Remington38 here for a reveiw! Over all I thought this was a very nice poem. It flowed very well and the imagery was fantastic. There were a lot of ...

    Jul 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Pastel

    Hello Remington38 here for a reveiw!!!!! The title of this caught my attention cause it stood out in such a unique way. I absolutely loved this poem and think that ...

    Jul 22, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Anthill

    Hello Remington38 here for a reveiw! It was short but I don't feel like it needs to be added onto. It has said what it needs to say and I ...

    Jul 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Picture Frames

    Hello Remington38 here for a reveiw! I would like to start off by saying welcome to YWS! I can tell already you will fit right in. Now onto this chilling ...

    Jul 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Tears? Cries? DUH! plz not in public.

    Hello Remington38 here for a reveiw! This is beyond relatable to me and pretty much describes me to a T. I shove emotions way down into a hole and cover ...

    Jul 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, Dramatic Re: Kit Kat Rap

    Hello!!! I saw the title of this and honestly had to read it. This make me laugh so much. I admire your rhyming skills and loved how creatively it was ...

    Jul 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Her

    Hi! I agree with the reviewer below me that when I read the title I was expecting some deep and heartfelt but not as much as there is. I really ...

    Jul 20, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Bright eyes. Chapter one

    Hello Remington38 here, Hi I really enjoyed this. My question is have you ever read The Giver because this is very similar? If not I recommend highly. My only nitpick ...

    Jul 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Booty Shorts

    I know you said in an earlier message to cut these off but I am just now reading this for the first time and was apparently missing something huge. So ...

    Jul 7, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sorry, The Light Has Been Extinguished

    Hello Remington38 here for a reveiw, This poem was absolutely amazing. I read one of your poems and could help myself to look at the long list of others you ...

    Jun 27, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Free at Last

    Hello Remington38 here! I really like the poem. It was short sweet and enjoyable. Though when I first read then title then first thing that popped into mhead was a ...

    Jun 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: ​Past Future

    Remington38 here for a review! Wow. When I first read the title I was worried because time travel is very hard in my opinion to write or describe but I ...

    Jun 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Reality

    Remington38 here for a reveiw! I really enjoyed reading this and am glad somebody finally wrote on this topic. Wow this is filled with truths that needed to be pointed ...

    Jun 7, 2016


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