RenGrey

Thank you sooooooo much! And yes I meant prolouge. Haha. Yes this draft I didn't like very much. I will probably be posting the new version soon. Been doing this ...

Thanks for the critique it really helps. Yea Im not a huge fan of this draft either. I'm working on another at the moment and I'm hoping it turns out ...

I really liked this. The vampires seem so realistic and not overly exaggerated or godlike. The names are unique and I really liked the ending. I don't know whether its ...

I liked it though it seemed a little broken up the way you had the formatting of the lines. Very good all the way though. I t was like I ...