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Thank you for the review. I will bear your suggestions in mind. GO SPIDERMAN! XD

fk u w***er

Yes. I am in existence.

Yay. Ditto. Hello fellow English person. ^.^

The opening paragraph was intended to be philosophical, however, I can see where you got Biblical from as the two tend to overlap. Glad you thought it was good, I ...

I barely remember what the inspiration for this piece was, something to do with the relationship between a mother and child, disintegrating. Glad you liked it. :)

It does help. Thank you for the review. :)

Ahhh. I see the point now. :) - BSF

Well there you go. We can French each other any time. O.O That sounded better in my head. :) LOL

Merci beaucoup. Ok, so there are quite a few errors in this, I thought as much, but this review is much appreciated. Thank you. :)

Actually this is really helpful. :) You made a good point about the introduction, I didn't think about how it could be misleading. But reading it back, it is a ...

Thank you so much for reading my work. Also, I'm really glad that it made you think so much, it was what I'd hoped for. :) Happy World Cup and ...

It was. But it was also great fun. I intend to do more works like this in the near future. Thanks again. :)

It was over Skype. It was typed though. So there were no ums. And I did have to edit all this and type it up myself for YWS purposes. Glad ...

Lulz Maturity at it's greatest. How about... let's not talk about sex. XD