Reonblade

Heya! I was reading this and was surprised that the more i read the more i came to like it! At the beginning I did not like Riley all that ...

Heya! I really like the story so far! I do agree with some of the past comments, it lacks some of the necessary descriptions, like what the seashell looked like, ...

I think this is a great start to a potentially deep novel! The 'Him' I thought was quite well done, it is a clear distinction from the psychologically impaired 'Her,' ...