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Re: Blood Child- Prologue
Very interesting! Your writing style and voice fit the story nicely. I just have one question, why would the guards be patrolling the slums if they were going to be ...
Dec 22, 2007 -
Re: Drink of Thyself-chp 1
Wow. Very interesting read. Is Ana an abbreviated form of Anaya? Claraification on that would help, if so. Also, did you mean to switch into first person here: "I giggled. ...
Dec 22, 2007