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  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: ​My Love

    I like the use of metaphors in your poem. It adds to its depth. What I would suggest is the use of punctuation marks in order to separate your thoughts. ...

    Jun 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: She's Brilliant

    Whoa man! Seems like who have a rough business with this "brilliant girl." It reminds me of Alison De Laurentis in pretty little liars. She seems like a manipulative person. ...

    Jun 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Mind and matter

    I liked your basic idea, the theme of this poem. We generally just make plans instead of acting upon them. Your poem has focused on that part of human nature ...

    Jun 25, 2015


For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein