Reyu

Don't mind them talking about cliches. It's ok sometimes. I do have one question... Why did you not try to create any sort of character association? This almost sounds like ...

Er... not published yet. Too lazy to be published, sadly, lol. But I have finished a novel and am looking for an agent. Novel? Since when? Email me a chapter? ...

My first and only bump.

I plan to have the next one up later tonight. Also, don't be afraid to chat here :) I appreciate all forms of criticism even the mean stuff. ~Reyu

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Tadima :)

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Aye. We still got 9 hours and 40 minutes until this place shuts down... LETS PARTY!!!

I linger on, but always in the shadows. It was a beautiful sunset wasn't it bob?

Link to TYWC. It's still there... Maybe one day it will have life again ^^

I may not have been the most active person here. But at least I was always watching. This site is a great thing, one of the only "truely" great things ...

I may not have been the most active person here. But at least I was always watching. This site is a great thing, one of the only "truely" great things ...

**Pulls a flier off the royal bulletin board** "Seeking An Experienced Blacksmith/Wood Worker. A Background In Jewelry Crafting Also Required." Crumpling the piece of parchment into a ball and tossing

You are not in the wrong for having the dialogue at the end. It gave this work a very mystical effect that just FLOWED with all the talk of wolf's. ...

Choppy. And I will assume griff is telling the truth about "what NOT to do"