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Re: Straight A's and Smudged Mascara
You are not in the wrong for having the dialogue at the end. It gave this work a very mystical effect that just FLOWED with all the talk of wolf's. ...
Feb 15, 2006 -
Re: Asher
If it was not 3am I would give you an extensive review... But seeing as it is 3am, I can not trust my mind :) A few points I will ...
Nov 23, 2005 -
Re: X-mas present - thanks!
I liked it. I do believe your father will like it too. Interesting side note: I gave a "book" of my work to my aunt once. Because she sent me ...
Nov 23, 2005 -
Re: A Short Story Entitled: A Beggar's Tale
Silly Snoink, just edit it :) Also, using the and symble (&) is fine, but I will admit that you over-used it. Story is great! but why did you post ...
Nov 22, 2005 -
Re: A Short Story Entitled: A Beggar's Tale
If it was not 5:30am I would tell you everything I think. But right now, I wonder where my mind is. So, logically, I can not trust it at the ...
Nov 21, 2005 -
Re: ARK
HA! he/she called you Snoinky :) Anyway, great start. I was so caught up in the reading that I forgot to check for any errors. It all felt so smooth. ...
Nov 16, 2005 -
Re: Creative Prologue (For Fun?) (R for graphic violence)
I wonder why takkar has to be changed... Anyway, my feelings are the same as Hunter and Snoink. Other issues that they did not express are as follows: To much ...
Nov 15, 2005 -
Re: The Wanderings Part 1 (so far)
Glad to see that you posted it. Has it been edited at all since my review? I did not bother to read it before commenting. Get crackin man! Get us ...
May 15, 2005 -
Re: Joe's Tavern
*pinches griffonkeeper* Yes, this is not fantasy. I am astounded, Griffinkeeper, that you spent as much time as you did analyzing this story. Even with the hour you spent, you ...
May 12, 2005