Rhea

This poem could be so good it made my brain explode. I agree with the girl above me that The pain turns to sadness And then it grows to anger ...

I think it needs to be broken up a bit. It reads too much like one long sentence. I think it help immeasurably if you read your poem out loud ...

I want to be a poet I want to be a poet yeah I want to be a poet I want to make you cry I want to make you ...

I'm a member of plenty of message boards. The intro posts are always so weird. I was referred here by someone from gaiaonline. I've kept a journal since I was ...