Rigel

Thank you for the comment! Of course there's more. It was originally going to be a full-length novel. I would have put it in the fantasy literature section had I ...

Better! Much better. At least this time around it makes sense. I am not the biggest fan of this dark style, but that's me. I think it's making a mountain ...

Ooh! I love riddles! Are you... A pyramid? (Hard to know what I think if I don't know what it's about, but I'm pretty sure I loved it)

It might just be the title, but this reminds me of William Finn's song "The Games I Play" where he's comparing love to a chess game and saying a lot ...

That was awesome. I liked the abrupt ending; it felt appropriate. I am a huge fan of anybody who can rhyme and give the poem a good beat. It may ...

I'm kidding. Read the subtitle. Then read it again.

Or perhaps I'm missing the point entirely...

It would be better if you could say what the assignment is, but this seems like a rant more than a poem. Are you really trying to make us feel ...

I have to say, I laughed when I read I did kidnapped a child The rest of it had some good ideas, but a poem is not ideas typed into ...

It's hard to bash something with the good old g-word in it, but I agree with everyone else. Inspirational words are pointless if we don't know what we're being inspired ...

Thank you! Those are my favorite parts too, actually.

It's like those Manhattan Diaries that they have on the second page of the New York Times, only much more subtly meaningful.

From your introduction, I could tell that you wanted to write a silly little poem, and by all means, you have succeeded. :D

How can I put this? There are other fish in the sea of blood and tears.

How about "Def to the Blind?"