Rigel

My heart has been ripped out, and the pitiful, tattered thing has been smeared across the walls of my soul. I think this is probably moving into the realm of ...

i liked the riming and all If there is once place on earth where this is appropriate, it's here. It's "rhyming."

Two things: 1. I adore "Sentiments cease to make sense" 2. It was lovely.

Why is it that bored people always write really emo poems?

To me, the substance of this poem was not in the words. The words, to me, were all things I'd heard before to describe rape.

I liked the title, but it seemed needlessly depressing to me.

Pretty neat. I'm a sucker for elegant character description, which you have, and you definitely took advantage of what you've given yourself. Exciting, too.

The beginning is a bit blunt, but yeah. The dialogue is nice. There's not a whole lot to review here, but it seems like a good something.

It isn't a complete sentence. And it is a term that is used. Hazmat suit. It's those big white things with tubes coming out of the neck that the police ...

And I could just look hazmat up in the dictionary except I am lazy and also mozilla spell check doesn't pick it up. Is it a word? . It's an ...

I like complex rhyme schemes... Its: ABABCCDDD and the last line is repeated in every stanza.

Maybe rhyme crypt with ripped or dipped?

He got a bachelors degree from brown university and talks about it like he graduated a little while ago and still has his whole life ahead of him. He calls ...