Rincewind

Thank you! That "is" was a typo, my bad. Glad you enjoyed it. The city has lost a certain hold inside. - my feeling of disconnection from the town I ...

Thank ya big big. I did what you suggested, I like it. Thanks for that.

I'm not trying to stick to any style whatsoever. From first to third and back again, I care not. The story will change like my moods and the seasons. And ...

Surely. I'm just going to go over one of the biggest samples of dialogue, and change to how I think it should sound. “My mother's angry. I disobeyed her when ...

I arrived to an empty house. Not entirely empty, just free of any other life. "Hullo?" I ventured. Nothing. I shrugged my shoulders and went directly to the fridge. Old ...

Here's my chance to be modest and bashful, hehe. Thanks Seeker

Well thank you endlessly, you kind kind fellow. As I'm sure you will soon see, this is a mere scene from a quite large piece I am writing. I will ...

Thanks then, I suppose. The forgotten apostraphes weren't on purpose. Weird that it annoyed you. Thanks for your input.

It came from Word, so no problem. PM me.

Thanks everyone...... Knock. Nothing. Knock. The sound of a person getting up off the couch. Knock Knock. "I'm coming. Relax!" "Shit, man. You're a sight for sore eyes!" "Ya ya, ...

I'm not female, and I thought it was a female. I guess im just the only observant one who paid attention to the title ;)

Indeed, my vote is slightly biased.

Good thing I revived this topic! Haha, its lovely!

Its called the Lady Spy, my assumption was the main charcter is the lady spy.

My girlfriend stood up and left me there. I guess she didn't like the shade afterall. She can preach to me all she wants about the necessity of an education. ...