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  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: My spectrum

    thank you for this encouraging review. i will ccorrect the typos..

    Jun 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: My spectrum

    thank you for the review but i suppose you have mistaken with my theme. its about the seven colours of rainbow, the different situations that we face which include both ...

    Jun 17, 2015
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Fantasy Re: I can sing it loud

    thank you for this review. i am personally not far enough from disappointment from my own work so i don't mind other pointing out that it isn't the best. i ...

    Jun 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Fantasy Re: Intimidated yet unconquered

    thank you for this review. and by the word paced i meant ignited, or speeded up. for further reference please check my reply on niteowl's post. thank you again for ...

    Jun 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Fantasy Re: Intimidated yet unconquered

    thank you, your review was very helpful. by the word " paced" i meant ignited, or rather burned it brighter, comparing it with a car that just increased its seeped ...

    Jun 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Dreams

    its easy first give a colon : and then a capital D , P etc, according to your wish. remember, don't keep any space between these characters. :D

    May 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Fantasy Re: Intimidated yet unconquered

    thank you for the appreciation. if you remember any cons that you noticed please let me know :D

    May 23, 2015
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Fantasy Re: I can sing it loud

    last question of yours gets the first answer- no, i have never ever written songs before. i have a rhythm in mind to be true that is why some lines ...

    May 17, 2015
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Fantasy Re: I can sing it loud

    thank you for this encouragement, i would try my to do better next time

    May 17, 2015
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Fantasy Re: I can sing it loud

    thank you, its actually my first time and even i am not fully satisfied..

    May 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Tinkles of the past

    thank you . your review was really helpful. i would certainly make the corrections

    Apr 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: I don't aim at heaven

    thank you very much. i would try to correct my cons and make it even better.

    Apr 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: so cliched!

    this was very funny , good observation i must admit. "Vampires have grown up No sucking or falling in love"- this was the best line i found. the full poem ...

    Apr 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Estrangement from desires

    thank you, i will take care of the parts your pointed out

    Apr 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Spiritual Re: Stoop to conquor

    thank you for the review , and stoop to conquer is a phrase which means to get something we must persevere.

    Mar 31, 2015


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