RiverStar73519

I love it. The dejected, underlying feeling of sadness and hopelessness is subtle yet so obvious. I'm very new to the world of poetry, but I can say I agree ...

Since you reviewed one of my poems, I'm going to review one of yours! Since yours was so in-depth, I'm going to make this concise. There's not much to review, ...

It's a cute poem. Your writing is nice, and I think it kind of goes over what needs to be said without being too wordy which would be obnoxious for ...

I like it, a lot. I love the ending! Powerful and moving. I'm thinking that the transition between talking about the flower and yourself is a little weak. Maybe go ...

I have to admit, I had no idea it was about sex either. Maybe you could insert words that kind of bring that forth more. The "Why can't he play?" ...

This is seriously one of the best things I have ever read on this site. This is CRAZY good. Your tone is perfect, your words are perfect, everything is perfect. ...

Hey! I really like this, I can really relate to what you're trying to say. I love the stanzas that rhyme, I think it flows nicely. Even when the poem ...

Hey! First, to start off, it's a cute story. I've read some previous chapters and they were fun. So, yeah! "He was balding, and was chubby." Here you could just ...

Hey. Thanks for the review!:) I like this a lot! It has a nice flow and it's adorable. Maybe try to be a little more descriptive with the scene to ...

Hey! Thanks for the review. This is a really cool idea. Expect the unexpected is the motto of my existence. I don't know if you need to put "Expect the ...

I really really liked this poem. It made me feel as if I were you... I'm a girl. That's awkward. Haha. No, really. My favorite line was, "Your hair carries ...

Hey! I really liked your poem! I was pleasantly surprised I must say. I loved that glass wall line. Somewhat cliche, but nice. I also enjoyed the ending line. I ...