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This.. Is.. Epic.. Seriously, it is. I really love how the emotions seem to flow out. It is very dramatic and emotional. I absolutely love it. The word choice and ...

*fires up chainsaw* Hy! First of all , yeah , it did sound like a song. And without background music, you cannot really review lyrics to the max, but the ...

Taking out a few spelling and punctuation issues, the poem is quite good. You captured the scenery quite well, but still, I believe more can be done. You haven't really ...

Hello. This is quite interesting. When I first started reading, I thought it would be just another rant on society, but I really liked how you wanted so startle emotions ...

Hy LifeTime, First of all , I personally like minimalistic writing, but maybe this is a bit too minimalistic. You evoked powerfull emotions really well, but you have just let ...

Hey Lil_Pau and Happy New Year to you too. First some structural changes. Winter laces the branches of the skinny, dry guardians along the dust and leaf-lined street; a gust ...

Very nice. I love it. The flow you established is great, I read it very easily. As in scenery , you've described it very well, inside and outside , very ...

It is good. The feelings it evokes are really strong , but are sometimes too mixed up , and I really can't make out what is really happening. The structure ...

I really like it. It didn't specifically bring up any feelings, but you've described the chaotic scenery and the atmosphere perfectly. I don't know about that coloured text or the ...

It is really good. :) I love that you treat the problem of change. That is my concern too. I think you really touched a soft spot with this poem. ...

This is not actually poetry, due to the way you have written it. But if rearange it , it will become a good poem. You really evoked a lot of ...

Yes. Keep it going. :) I just love how you pictured the whole scene and the very sweet and kind of less obvious emotions you brung up. You could have ...

You are sick. Sick, sick, sick! I loved it. I really felt everything that gardener felt when he saw his wife.. When he red the letter. That is the thing ...

There was one tiny detail that kept me going.. That little tiny [ that doesn't sound right ] detail , so cunningly put there to keep the reader reading. Well ...

What a wonderful declaration of love. It is pure raw emotion that you evoke. That is what makes the poem special and notable. Believe me that I really had to ...