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Robz

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Reflections of youth

    I actually entered this into a competition at my school, the first line was meant only for the judges. Was supposed to edit that out. Thanx

    May 16, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Reflections of youth

    Th "cold, hard glow" is referring more to his childhood(previous line) than to the actual ember. Sorry about that, is quite confusing. Thanx for the comments, really encouraging :)

    May 15, 2010


I wonder if people felt the freedom in our culture to love louder, if they'd be quicker to say "I miss you" when the absence of someone is felt instead of just thinking it.
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