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  • Poetry » Chickens, Chickens Re: The Comedi-hen

    Your chicken poetry is so fun, I almost want to read it again. The poem is very playful in playing with the format and puns. I love the chicken puns ...

    Feb 9, 2023
  • Short Story » Humor, Satire Re: Short horror sentences (for people with long hair)

    Right off the bat this story had me giggling at every sentence, its just funny from beginning to end XD. As a person who use to have long hair (I ...

    Feb 2, 2023
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Lilac Hairpin

    I want to say this right off the bat, your poem was pretty good. It flows pretty smoothly, even when I read them aloud. Honestly until the end, I thought ...

    Jan 31, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The accidental magic: chapter one

    So starting this off with some parts I liked about this story, or I guess chapter one. The story gets going doesn't slow down or skip any beats. Basically your ...

    Jan 24, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Review Re: WHAT is youth ?

    Your poem was interesting to read, while at the same time I felt that "oh god, I felt this way" and being too real of a feeling for me right ...

    Jan 24, 2023
  • Article / Essay » Satire, Humor Re: Rudolph the Red-Nosed Reindeer Makes No Sense if You Think About It

    Okay this essay was funny to read, I ended up chuckling through the entire thing while agreeing with some of the points along the way. Like the Hermey becoming a ...

    Jan 20, 2023


That's how we should measure our lives. Not in distance traveled, or time passed, or worlds conquered, but in moments... and the rush of joy—of grace—that exists within them.
— Megatron (Lost Light, by Roberts, Lawrence, Lafuente)