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Ronaele

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Breaking the mould

    I thought you had a good storyline here, with plenty of scope for more about the girl and her life. There were quite a few errors though - mostly punctuation ...

    Oct 28, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: autopsy

    An excellent poem. So clinical straightaway because of the numbers. " This, forever, is the smell of medical school: death and chemicals and tropical fruit. " What a great sentence ...

    Oct 28, 2005


“Rise like Lions after slumber In unvanquishable number. Shake your chains to earth like dew Which in sleep had fallen on you— Ye are many—they are few.”
— Mary Shelly