Ronald559

I'm going to read this but I can't right now. Can you reply so that I have it in my notifications please?

Thanks for reading. It's weird I didn't get a notification for this.

Wow, you got me good. A lot of the things you pointed out I just shook my head like, how did I miss that? I thought I fixed some of ...

You seem like a good writer. A good writer listens, and I'm judging that based off of other reviews people gave you. I'll follow your story.

Lonesome Dove or Blood Meridian. If I had to choose it'd have to be Blood Meridian by Cormac McCarthy. He's really difficult to read. I hate his style but he's ...

Oh it's all right. I appreciate the genre, and people that write for it. You are fairly authentic just be careful to not be cliche. It's easy to be cliche ...

You are 15 years old. That's a damned good chapter for a 15 year old. I thought this was better than your first chapter. Because something actually happened. We got ...

I forgot your intro! Don't start with, it was finally over. It's a little amateurish.

Oh yeah if you can please look at the western story. Also I think it's your birthday. Happy Birthday!

Did it make you laugh? Thanks for the review! Very helpful!

People can be very rude in reviews. Like blatantly rude. I give pointed reviews on this site because I want to help people. But some people have this holier than ...

I got only 95 points.

Lol that doesn't deserve an apology. Comedy is the hardest thing, every one has a different sense of humor, and in general it's hard to make people laugh. I think ...

Writers have a plan for their story, I understand. I'll keep following the story, and keep making suggestions. :)

Read the Lost Phoebe. It's a short story by Theodore Dreiser. It'll break your heart in two. And if you like that, read the Open Boat by Stephen Crane. You ...