Ronnok

Thanks, both of you. I know i have a long long way to go. This was just a part, i didn't write this twice by the way. It was just ...

A well structured beginning that has left me wanting more! I strongly suggest that anyone reading this piece read the second and third chapters as the plot is hinted at ...

Thanks. I will be keeping the core concept of this piece but likely (I'm not entirely sure yet) do a restart in a different setting. Also I've found myself exceptionally ...

Thanks everyone for your reviews. I will be putting everyone's feedback to use ASAP! Karsten i see what your saying. I was especially worried about the cliche elements to this ...