Rook

Thanks! Nice profile pic by the way!

um, I only know it's about desperation. It just sort of flowed out onto paper one day. Thank you.

Thank you

Thank you for your suggestions!

Thank you. The "A's" were intentional. And I have no idea what to capitalize in poems. Feel free to peruse my writings. There will be a lot more coming up ...

Thanks so much!

Thank you! I really don't know what I'm supposed to do with capitalization in poems.

Yes, it was kind of on purpose, I was going to make every line start with "a" but that was impossible.

Thank you for your review! The part with the sea of glass I put in there to show that all though most of what she says makes sense if you ...

I don't know what I was talking about very well myself, but A lot of it had to do with the hope that you can still find even when everything ...

This was so sad. I liked the symbolism. good job. Keep writing.

Thank you so much!