RoryLegend

Since I just left a random message on your page I thought I would give you a review as well. This story REALLY kept me interested. We were completely inside ...

Okay. I have a nitpick haha. She seems way too comfortable at his house. I mean skipping down the hall and easily talking with his mother? I think her feeling ...

Always, You are an amazing writer. This story may be your golden goose. The emmotion I felt in these chapters was intense. I can very highly relate to everything Shilah ...

Wow. This was very good. Obviously every story has room for rewrites and editing but I think this is very impressive. I love how you described the characters because that ...

O Romeo! You doth say it too much! I liked this but as the other's already said, switch up the O Romeo's. It will improve this piece a lot. You ...

I enjoyed this. I love rhyming poems! Haha. I also liked that it was short, sweet, and to the point! Sometimes poets can get so wrapped up in their words ...

I found this very interesting. It was definately dark and strange but it's good to be broad about what you read. I thought it was well written, there weren't any ...

I adored this. Hermione was always my favorite character in the books (save for Luna). I recall dressing up as her for one halloween, wig and all. Anywho, the review. ...

HAHAHAHA! That was great! A true day brightener and work of genious! (There was a line where Leto says "You can that again!" I think "say" is supposed to be ...

I must say that I really liked this story. I felt like I could relate to it, a lot. I love the way you wrote it, I mean the absense ...

Hello! I have to tell you I have no experience with trying to write drunken memories so I'm not sure if I'll be much help. I think that you should ...

Bahahahahaha! That was the funniest thing I have ever read! There were too many parts that I was dying laughing at to even attempt to put them all in this ...

Whaaaaaat! That was super good. I like your style kid. Haha I must say that Evan was my favorite character of the bunch. I flat out just like the way ...

First of all I love you. I LOVE SUPERNATURAL. This was amazing. The dialogue fit them perfectly and I could see them saying everything you put in the dialogue. Especially ...

Way to be. I don't have much to critique on this. I just wanted to tell you that your title really makes me laugh. I like! The story was definatly ...