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Re: I didn't have many friends growing up/ but I had plenty of bad influences
RoyalHighness has arrived to review! I love how abstract and /weird/ this is. It's so nice to read a funky poem now and then. I feel like if I were ...
Apr 16, 2014 -
Re: the art of swallowing worlds
Wow I have nothing but praise for this, but I'm speechless so. When you look up "phenomenal," in the dictionary, the definition is this poem. I loved this, plain and ...
Apr 11, 2014 -
Re: United- Chapter 2
RoyalHighness has (finally) arrived to review! Sorry it took me so long! I have finally come for you, my dear. Okay, so this is good. You're doing a fanfic and ...
Apr 11, 2014 -
Re: The Martians Killed President Kennedy
RoyalHighness has arrived to review! I bow down to you, Fiend. I find it so difficult to write humor into poetry, so you've won my respect. *bows* Now, for the ...
Apr 11, 2014 -
Re: Meticulous
RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Alright, so this was very nice. Lots of imagery, lots of descriptions, lots of personification. Overall, really, really good! There are just a few nitpicks ...
Apr 11, 2014 -
Re: Relapse & Recovery
RoyalHighness has arrived to review! So this was really, really good. A few lines were a little clunky, a little awkward but other than that, I don't really have a ...
Apr 10, 2014 -
Re: when you're mad, you're never alone.
WOW RoyalHighness has arrived to review. I would nitpick on capitalization of the "I's," but honestly I couldn't care less about those because honestly this poem was beautiful. I love ...
Apr 10, 2014 -
Re: Father
RoyalHighness has arrived to review! I have to echo @Em101Cats because I love how you only hint at the problems but never quite say it outright. I love the time ...
Apr 10, 2014 -
Re: Life's Secret
RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Just a few nitpicks: "To" should be "too." Every single one. You need a verb in the line "They say there eyes too small." Fix ...
Apr 10, 2014 -
Re: Backstabbers.
RoyalHighness has arrived to review! This is a really powerful piece. I love the imagery of the words as actual knives. You displayed how it feels to be gossiped about ...
Apr 10, 2014 -
Re: Not For Me
RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Alright, this is a vent piece, I see, so I won't really critique your form because I know I hate when people nitpick on stuff ...
Apr 10, 2014 -
Re: Scars
YOU WERE RIGHT. RoyalHighness has arrived to review! I don't even know how to review this, to be honest. But I think the beginning could've been a little bit more ...
Apr 10, 2014 -
Re: The words on these walls
*freaks out* I LOVED THIS RoyalHighness has arrived to review! The beginning was my only problem. I've read so many poems about depression, I kind of sighed when I read ...
Apr 10, 2014 -
Re: Forever I Will Be.
*flails* WHAT RoyalHighness has arrived to review. Well the ending of this poem hit me like a brick wall. I agree with @Iggy about the beginning. It's not much of ...
Apr 10, 2014 -
Re: Autumn Afternoon
*falls in love with your poem* RoyalHighness has arrived to review! A few nitpicks: "summers" and "winters" need some apostrophes. "Frosty aired," should be "frosty-aired." The fourth-to-last line is
Apr 10, 2014