RoyalHighness

Thank you thank you thank you so much!!! I'm so glad you liked it. I'll have to find some quirks to add to Juno's personality to make her more fun ...

Thank you so much! I fixed everything you suggested, because I did feel this was a bit rushed. Hopefully the added descriptions and a few changes I made will help! ...

Awh! ^-^ that's too nice :D And I totally am; I've been hooked all day!

Thank you so much! As for the dialogue attribution, I tend to use "say," or "said," a lot more in my writing, because if I have to write "whispers," or ...

Thank you so much for catching up with me! I really appreciate your review. I edited the things you suggested! I usually do change the things readers ask me to ...

Alrighty! I have edited according to your wishes. Those DARNED ELLIPSES MAN they keep eluding me! Thank you so so much for your review, Deanie!!!! Your opinion means the world

Thank you for the review!! And wow, I wasn't expecting you to really read all the other chapters! :O Dedication, right there. You. Found. The. Hole. In. My. Story. I ...

Thank you for the review!! I fixed the ellipses because I agree with you%u2013 they can get annoying! As for the resolution between Juno and Asteria, I didn't think the ...

THANK YOU I needed this review. I fixed those darned ellipses, and the Adrian text. The "Shame written all over," has a nice ring to it for me, so I'm ...

Alrighty! Thank you so much! I fixed the punctuation bit, I explained a bit why Juno isn't sad (it's because she fights with Asteria a lot more often than you ...

Ah! Thank you! I did change all the things you suggested specifically, but I'm not great at editing in things that are more abstract. All I can do is promise ...

Thank you, Traunt! The nitpicks are especially helpful, because my knowledge of the mechanics of the English language is very shallow. I can't tell you how much I appreciate your ...

Oh YES I'm so glad you like that ship because I LOVE IT! I fixed the "Just saying," because I'd forgotten I'd even written that and you're right, it's a ...

Thanks Noelle! I'll get right on that nitpick because I really like that little thing.

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RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Okay, as usual, I'll start off with I'm a huge fan of your stuff, because it's always really well done. That being said, I wasn't ...