Ruby68

Hi! Happy Review day! Wow, this poem is really beautiful. It's a little sad and the imagery is amazing. I really can't find anything you should change. I really love ...

Hi there! Happy review day! I really liked this, I think I liked it even more than the first chapter. I especially enjoyed the dream sequence, it's very well written. ...

Hi there, and happy review day! I really liked this story! It's very well written. It's a bit confusing at times given the fact that the reader doesn't know exactly ...

Hi, and happy review day! I really liked this, especially the twist at the end. It was a really good and original idea. I wasn't quite sure about your rhyme ...

Hi there, and happy review day! First off, I enjoyed this poem. It was dark and realistic. The rhyming did get to be a bit much at times, however. None ...

Hi there, and happy review day! First let me say that I really enjoyed this poem. It was a tad confusing at points, but I think it was meant to ...

Wow, this is really powerful. I've been in a situation like this twice once was almost exactly like what this poem describes. You really capture the feelings of guilt for ...

Well... I'm not quite sure what to think of this. Perhaps you meant to make a point with your spelling, but if so it was lost on me. I've looked ...

When I read the first line of this I really didn't know what to think, but I kept going and I'm glad I did. This is a very interesting and ...

I love the flow and repetition of this poem. It's really beautiful. I like how you almost made the seasons into people. I love the line "Alongside weary branches shaking ...

I actually liked this a lot. It's definitely a different take on zombies. I love your use of sarcasm and comparisons. Here are a few changes I would suggest: "Now, ...

I really liked this! It's simple, beautiful, and relatable. It has a nice flow and beautiful wording. I couldn't really find much wrong with this. If I'm going to nitpick, ...

Overall, I thought this was a pretty good story. I'm interested to see where this is going, and curious about Luke. There were, however some errors. Mostly they were grammatical ...

What a lovely little story! This gives a lot of insight into a culture that I am unfamiliar with but you made everything very clear, even for a complete outsider. ...

Really well done! I barely noticed the lack of e's. This was a hard challenge and you managed to pull it off really nicely. I love some of the synonyms ...