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Wandering here and there, this one shall wander until she ends.

  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: Bare Bones

    Hello! Rurouni here to review! And welcome to YWS! I like this poem, more specifically the imagery. I can picture someone holding a skull. I applaud you on that! My ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Titleless (Cutting Poem) *Trigger Warning*

    Hello! Rurouni from Rugido Sol here to review! Well... A very interesting poem... I have some nitpics however. Her tears are all that’s left of her the rest has all ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Pins and Twine.

    Hello, Rurouni is here to review from Rugido Sol! I liked this! It had a nice feeling of, yeah I'm alone, but I know you're there. I don't have any ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Cold hearted.

    Hello! Rurouni here to review from Rugido Sol! Alright, this is nice! I like it, and some people do have cold hearts... But anyways! I have some nitpicks! Your intro... ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Seven Sins In My Home

    Rurouni here to review from Rugido Sol! Happy Review Day! Well, nice poem! I like it! It's well written, and a raw emotion poem? Either way, its good. I do ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Sipping Orange Juice

    Hello! Rurouni here to review from Rugido Sol! This is.. Nice! Its a bit... Not random, but it goes everywhere. I do like how its a bit all over the ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Rainstorms

    Hey! This one wandered by! Here to review is Rurouni! Well, even though you might think it sucks, I think its wonderful! Acrostic poems aren't always the easiest, or have ...

    Jun 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Shadow Friends

    Hi! This one wandered over and decided to review! Well... It might be an easier read if it were broken down into stanzas, but that's my opinion. I have one ...

    Jun 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Pruning Weeds on Cedar Mulch; Life is Unfair

    Hi... Shad here! You wanted me to review this so... I can't nitpick on anything, if that's what you wanted. The stanzas are nice and aren't choppy. And I get ...

    Jun 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Songbird's Signal

    Hey! Rurouni here to review! May Poetry Exchange 2014! Let me tell you, you had me counting your lines and everything to ensure it was a villanelle. I'm not very ...

    May 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: They Call Me a Writer

    Hello! Rurouni here to review! From the May Poetry Exchange 2014! I must agree with you. A lovely poem. I enjoyed how you kept up the, "They call me a ...

    May 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: you will not win tonight

    Hey! Rurouni here from the May 2014 Poetry Exchange! May I just say this is.... Interesting? Very interesting, but also very nice and... yeah. Interesting! This is very unique. I'm ...

    May 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Red Roses/Black Roses

    Okay. Happy Review Day! Rurouni here to review! Alright. This was good. I liked it. The only nitpicks I have are the links, which just link to this page. If ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: What is Love?

    Hello! Rurouni here to review! Interesting poem. I like it. But I have some nitpicks. Is it the infliction on our lives as we know it only to be ripped ...

    May 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Dining With Life

    Hello! Rurouni here to review! I liked this poem, it has a nice tone to it. Your poetry lines are long, but I like it. It gives it a different ...

    May 24, 2014


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings