Ryan

That's actually pretty good, I'm not one for correcting harry potter facts, and I don't have much to say grammar wise. I'd just like to point out the last paragraph ...

Micah, dont worry about what that 'Reichieru', I can't see anything better that SHE has done. No I really liked and and hope your doing a sequel.

Remind me evreyone, next time I'm going on hoilday, I'm staying here! Was that through school?

Good job Slytherinseeker! Is there anyway I can give my Dad that?

Yes thanks for that, but as I said, I only just wrote it and didn't check the grammar. Although the grammar has been checked by me and by my editor. ...

more?

That was alright. There were a few grammar mistakes in there but really who cares! How much more have have you written on the story so far?

Thanks for the tips buddy! Yes I am sorry that that is all I can post at this time as the rest is being worked on by an editor and ...