Rydia

I've never thought YWS outdates and generally I don't have any suggestions. True, the site isn't perfect. I'd love a short-cuts section that members could personalise with links to the ...

Raven "Do you think we were maybe a little harsh on Ilum?" Raven wondered as she dressed and then used her magic to sap the moisture from the air and ...

I've really fallen behind with mine but I have an idea for one that I'm going to write up soon and I think it could work quite well. Here's crossing ...

No problem and don't worry about reviewing anything of mine, it's not necessary. April 12: I like the idea behind this one but I think the imagery could have been ...

I currently have 1168 reviews and will be aiming for 1250 which would be my final red star. That's a total of 82 reviews and I am aiming to achieve ...

6: change in the weather. I think you should change weather as it's a little soon after weathervane and seems repetitive. Maybe use storm or breeze? Other than that, I ...

This is good. I have to agree that the hospital scene could have been a little better. It's not that it wasn't realistic, more that it was stereotypically realistic. It ...

You can press the button by the door and I'll come," said Derik, getting of f the bed and brushing off the back of his suit. "Besides, I'm on a ...

6: change in the weather. [color=red][I think you should change weather as it's a little soon after weathervane and seems repetitive. Maybe use storm or breeze? Other than that, I ...

I know. I was waiting until the exchange between Ilum and Karana is complete.

You can press the button by the door and I'll come," said Derik, getting of the bed and brushing off the back of his suit. "Besides, I'm on a role ...

D was laughing his ass off by the time Grif walked all the way back to the base. He handed him the money and said, “You have no idea how ...

I think this could have been more descriptive but it's good and I think it will work perfectly! It really catches the reader's attention and I think they will certainly ...

It should say Sharky of course ;)

I'm not sure about this one. There's something pretty and soothing and yet also melancholic about it, yet I can't quite place my finger on any solid image or emotion. ...