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Hi there Zoe, welcome to YWS. I think writing site for the sharing and improving of all literary works pretty much sums this place up but there is also the ...

A very creepy story. Just a few comments... It used to be that [s]at[/s] every night , at eight o’clock, Delilah would take a stroll through the park while smoking ...

It's well written and I'd probably class it as poetic prose but something's not quite right. I think you need to express the emotions more. They're there, hidden behind the ...

I think description is essential. A reader needs the visual image.

Yeah I think it does. That's an awful lot of conditions!

I've experienced very little in the way of roamnce but I've written a fair few love poems, some negative and some positive. In fact my quote is the first stanza ...

This ones brilliant! I love the vibrant colours and the contrast with the dark sky.

Heather and Scipio awoke to the sounds of battle. For a moment their eyes met and then, with a nod, both sprang from their beds and hurried outside. The fight ...

(The Tavern is in the town nearest to the fortress so why not pop over for a drink when your work is done :wink:) Falcon I spent a few hours ...

Tigra "That seems like a reasonable cause," I murmered, adding the scraps of information to my presumptions. After than, an awkward silence decsended, as it often does between people who ...

Greeting Nicole and Hana. I'm sure you'll both fit in fine here but if you need some help navigating the sight or want a critique on some of your work, ...

Well I used to be a christian but certain events have resulted in me being a non religious, open minded person. I wouldn't go so far as to say I'm ...

Uh... They collect milk. Lol. My knowledge doesn't stretch much further than that except that they are going out of business because of home delivery from supermarkets and such. I ...

I'm not sure. What do the graphs represent? Do you have a list of statistics with them?

I loved these books! It's been a few years since I've read them but I'd recommend them to anyone. Garth Nix is an imaginative, brilliant writer.