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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: fist story posted

    I liked it, had raw emotion that a lot of readers can appreciate. Maybe be careful of run on sentences, and have more paragraphs at the beginning. Besides those I ...

    Jun 8, 2007
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Diary of Autumn Day Blake

    I thought you created a character I could defintely relate to. I liked how you didn't try to pretend like Autum knew it all andcould get any guy she wanted. ...

    Jun 8, 2007


i like that the title of dr jekyll and mr hyde makes a clear stance that the embodiment of one’s own evil doesn’t get a claim to the doctorate
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