SASSYLADY333

I liked it. Just correct a few mistakes and maybe clear up of the confusing parts and its really good.;).

Thanks Tina! ;)

I hope you'll like chapter two!

Thanks! I will, I'm defintely excited to add more to this story. :)

lol thanks , I will.

Thanks Tony! You caught things no one esle did. And I think once I make some adjustments my wirititng wil be more enjoyable. :). hope you like what I have ...

God, finally someone got the skirt part. lol. Yeah I need to work on developing my characters more and deciding upon the other all view of the story I thank ...

Thank you two for your reviews! Helps very much, thanks for pointing stuff out that I over looked! :)

Thank you so much! Got thirty-four pages plenty for the future. ;).

I liked it, it was mature writing with a simplistic style which could pull the reader in. Good job Sam.

I agree, I'm a dialogue freak....lol.

Well you see those things your thinking I want my readers to think.......lol. You'll have to wait and she how Alicia really feels. And the tips were great thank you! ...

Thanks, I'm working in a prologue right this second, lol. Maybe i'll update this and post it in a few days. I'll review some of your work DB93, appreciate the ...

Thanks, your right it was just one big text. :D

Thanks, I want to go back and add a lot of detail lol. Plus spelling errors I thought i fixed i didn't my computer crashed a few weeks ago. So ...