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  • Article / Essay » Other, Realistic Re: Dear world,

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    nd welcome to YWS!) This is a very nice story! Your concluding sentence left a huge impact on me, and other readers as well, I'm sure. Anyway, on to the ...

    Feb 8, 2016
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Lunch Money

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    nd welcome to YWS!) This is a very nice story! Your concluding sentence left a huge impact on me, and other readers as well, I'm sure. Anyway, on to the ...

    Feb 8, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Chapter 1

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    I am really liking where this story is going. It kept my attention the whole time I was reading which is always an important thing and you only had a ...

    Jan 8, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Like the Back of My Hand

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    I have edited all the spelling and hopefully all the punctuation mistakes. I have combined some of the sentences into a way that makes it read a bit better. Now ...

    Dec 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Science, General Re: Fight For Sunlight

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    Like I said, I'm just going through your poems to see what you've got up. Alright, so this review is just going to be a basic thing because I'm going ...

    Oct 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Teen Fiction Re: The Confused Little Fellow

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    Everyone stood uncomfortably. “Ben, I can help with your nose,” Noah said quietly. Ben nodded. “Thanks,” I followed them to the medical quadrant where Noah managed to stop the bleeding. ...

    Oct 1, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: to be

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    Not a whole lot I can say about this, but if I were to say something, you made a nice story in a nice number of lines. It makes me ...

    Oct 1, 2015
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: Worlds Collide (Part 2)

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    Life is beautiful and yet life is not a bed of roses. Though it is full of ups and downs it has many facets of blessings and successes. To some ...

    Jul 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Guardians

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    -Grammar, for one. There were a few times I think you probably just got a little too excited and forgot to capitalize a word or two, which happens to all ...

    Jul 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Hexamon ~ 2

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    -Grammar, for one. There were a few times I think you probably just got a little too excited and forgot to capitalize a word or two, which happens to all ...

    Jul 2, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Alien with Ivory

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    he four vampires congregated around the fireplace that was now lit to give the room a more homely feel. Caius’ tall, pale physique leaned against the mantelpiece in front of ...

    Jun 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: The Progeny: Chapter 25

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    The below story is flawless He four vampires congregated around the fireplace that was now lit to give the room a more homely feel. Caius’ tall, pale physique leaned against ...

    Jun 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Family History Repeats Itself

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    So I really did like the idea behind this poem but it was still really weird. For one I felt like you were trying too hard with some of the ...

    Jun 29, 2015


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