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SabrinaO

SabrinaO

  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Historical Fiction Re: Blurb for my novel

    Hello! I find it rather difficult to review just the blurb from your novel but I'm going to try anyway. I adore fiction writing so your story instantly caught my ...

    Aug 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Bring The Rain- Chapter 1

    Hello! Your story grabbed my attention when i read the word "Upir". I had never heard of this before so of course I'm interested. Your first chapter is a pretty ...

    Aug 24, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Action / Adventure Re: Dagger Wars - Chapter 1

    Hello! The minute i read your story description i was ready to jump right into the action! Your story idea and concept are so intriguing that you instantly have the ...

    Aug 24, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Little Bird {WIP}

    "I embraced the hushed whispers of the forest as I travelled through the dense maze of underbrush." Your first sentence perfectly sets the tone that you carry throughout the whole ...

    Aug 23, 2015


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— Mark Twain