Sai9

Hey another poem from Fire Eyes nice. I think my favorite lines from this are definitely "Just social norm, Everyone must conform" that was really good I think. I remember ...

This is good :) I can feel what your putting down without it coming off like a rant or a ramble and for something quick and emotional like this that ...

Wow! that's so creative pal and the rhymes come off super smoothly. Honestly I don't have anything constructive to say that hasn't already been said but hehe I want review ...

This is really good :o , I like that it leaves things up for interpretation enough to think about it but it isn't so vague that it seems like there ...