Sam

you'll get it later...heehee... Thanks, Jack and Nate!

I didn't especially get that as much, Nate...however, it was kind of awkward. Cool though. But could you distinguish 'you' and 'she' better?

Oh yeah. :D lol HAHAHAHA very...erm...enlightening, yes, Sierra.

Noooooo.... please, i beg of you, come up with part two!

*meep* I'm kind of confused at the end though...did the guy or the horse fall over the ridge? Other than that, it was pretty good. Nothing profound, but good nonetheless.

*sob* Why do you have to trash the sweater vest!!!!! *everyone stares at sam* NO, i'm not wearing one, nope...

Erg! Is this the end? It had better not be the end...lol. Hee, I caught the last line. Very well done, Kay Kay!

Don't put the horse's name in italics...it's not a boat, for God's sake. Sorry I wasn't here earlier! Internet troubles. :D

Much, much better. And you'd better be happy...I gave you an actual critique...

You'll find out why in a moment...

This is really cool, but I'm confused...all the names are over my head lol.

Cool... I don't have much to critique, as it's pretty short, but I like it.

Hah. Love the title...don't get the poem...w00t

He doesn't. That's the point...lol w00t! 54th of foot!

*dials 911* Yes, officer, we have a Poe clone on the loose... (I already told you what I thought lol...mucho goodness)