SarcasticMockery

This is very, very good! You have a way with words. The description is amazing and I love the way you've phrased things. Mistakes I've found or things I think ...

This is fantastic! I noticed a few mistakes but I'm more interested in this idea. It's such a good little idea that you (if you can think of them) make ...

Hiya! You first chapter is a good length but I did notice (sorry) a lot of mistakes. They can easily be fixed and we've all done them. I'll list a ...

Okay, so i read through the previous reviews to see what I can add and ashamed to say there isn't much dragonofphoenix missed. But there are things that I must ...