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My mom's dad was French, but I've never been there before. I do "study" the language though. And yes I have written quite a few poems lol YWS might as ...

Beautiful imagery. I love the contrast here between the fragility of fireflies and the animosity of your diction.

Hey, just a tip. If you want to quote something, you can use the code [ quote][/ quote]. It helps out a ton when reviewing.

Wow. I felt this so deeply. Beautiful.

You're most welcome.

Without getting into detail, this was beautiful. You had me hooked from the very beginning and the end - oh my goodness! Beautiful. I did have some nitpicks here and ...

Ah, sorry. I'm editing this between two documents lol

Thank you so much for this, Panda! I went through and did a considerable amount of editing. I hit all of your points, I'm sure, and would love to hear ...

Oops. The first error is supposed to be "Mi's" and then I accidentally wrote on top of the last stanza. Sorry xD

I've been doing some editing in the last few hours and I've already crafted a new starter hymn. It's still unfinished, but this is what I have: never will there ...

Nope, but I figured with the style it's written in, I didn't need all of the rest. But I do want to read from the beginning once I free up ...

Ah, I see. I was assuming it was a radio broadcast.

I am a girl in love with ellipses xD I will try to managed how many I use when writing in the future. I'm seeing now that they lose their ...

Thank you so much for your review! As I go to edit this prologue more, I'm finding it to be extra as well. There are some things I want to ...

Sorry about the prologue thing. I was messing around with my Portfolio and screwed some things up lol Thank you for pointing it out. About the focus change, I like ...