Sassykat

I think this was fantastic, totally relatable. Just one little thing, and I'm pretty sure it's just me, and that's that it seems to just...end. Not a super strong conclusion ...

This is beautifully worded and the indecision you as the narrator are facing is running off these stanzas like rain on a effortless, it sounds simply like a train of ...

To begin with, I think this poem flowed very nicely. I like the way you used this format. HOWEVER. There were several mistakes which I can only take are typos; ...

I used to walk passed a bluebird's nest, with a star across my chest. and I used to was passed a bluebird's nest, with a star across my chest. "Passed" ...

This was pretty cool. I LOVE days like those. I have ooone little nit-picky thing to point out, though: Days like this scare me just a little, After the adrenaline ...

*finds the magic "adore" button and clicks about seventy three times* This was SO amazing! You went on at the beginning about how it didn't have any specific scheme in ...

This is SO adorable! I am SO in love with Taylor. I want to take him to prom when I'm old enough. You have an amazing writing style, keep at ...

It was a well-written piece. I have one complaint, though, and that is that it wasn't rated. Some of the content certainly deserved 12+, even 16+. Just saying. I really ...

Tee hee, A fellow fantasy lover...glad to hear your proud of it! Now, I do have one smaaaalll critique. It's really just a matter of opinion. I think that in ...

DUDE. This was totally unbelievable. I could totally tell exactly what you were talking about the whole time, even though you didn't come right out and say "basketball." And I've ...

So this is for the Emotions Attack! contest...came with sudden inspiration while I was writing an essay about justice. Oh, the irony. The emotion I am trying to show is ...

This turned out waaay sharper and cooler than I expected. Tell me what you think :D thanks!

Most of what I saw in your picture (and then some) has already been pointed out, but I noticed one thing that just nagged at me...but if I'm the only ...

I write in my journal...That's a melodrama/novel/soap opera all in one. XP

No copyright infringement intended, just had some fun with it. :D ~~~~~ It’s been a really really messed up week Four-plus days of torture, four-plus days of bitter I’ve got ...