Sassykat

DUDE. This was totally unbelievable. I could totally tell exactly what you were talking about the whole time, even though you didn't come right out and say "basketball." And I've ...

This was one of those songs where I could imagine the actual music because the words had that perfect rhythm and beat that flowed perfectly, just like...well, just like music. ...

I agree wholeheartedly with jkr5horses. However, I did find one small critique that I cannot call anything but a minor typo; When your staring and not blinking "Your" should be ...

This was sweet. I can relate to your inspiration; I find myself wondering that same thing at times. :D I did have a few critiques for this, the biggest of ...

I have read "Out of the Dust", and I think you did a very good job with this. You've captured the emotions very well...yes, i said "emotions". I sensed a ...

I liked the simpleness of this poem. It made it easy on the eyes and mind :D I'll start with the boring stuff. the one I trust just lost it ...

Okay I'll start with the boring stuff: I had gently run my hand through your small face, studying every fold, every crease If you just look at this you can ...

This was an interesting read; How you portrayed standing out as a bad thing, instead of positive individuality and such. It's one that makes people think. Anyway, I had one ...

This was so cool. It's amazing what you can do with 150 words when you put your mind to it. I had a couple critiques, though: I did it for ...

This was amazing! It was so well thought out, I really don't have much to say to it. One thing I noticed, and it may be that I just read ...

There is a song in this girl, A song filled with music. I really liked how you made this line: how something may have/be a song, but not necessarily be ...

Oh , A ngel of F ate I do not believe No comma That the fate you have chosen is the fate for me , For I make my own ...

An amusement ride, I presume? How true, how very, very true. I enjoyed it. I just have a few critiques to make: As we accend, riders silence and raise their ...

The first thing I noticed, grammar-wise, is that you have missed a couple of punctuation marks. Like here: I wonder sometimes if things were different if I’d still be wrapped ...

Okay, first of all, without even reading your story, I can already tell you one thing: SPACE. IT. OUT. Nobody wants to read a story that jumps right into a ...