SaturnTears

Okay, sorry to bust your bubbles, but this isn't ready to be published... First, you need to get better at your phrasing. Frost asked as it would seem odd leaving ...

Mary-sue First thing. What is a Mary-sue? A Mary-sue is a flawless perfectionist with everything a character wants. Except for the readers. Sure, not every reader hates a Mary-sue, but ...

Nice, I like it :D. But, there's one 'i' that wasn't capitalized in the first part, other than that, it was great :D. I don't see it... as something dramatic ...

(Might be some spoilers in here for those who didn't read yet O.o) “Make an account for the chat room,” he said. (The commaaaaa! You do a lot of these ...