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SavageRaptor109

SavageRaptor109

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A God Named Sin | Senior Project - 1

    Thank you! I'll be sure to fix those mistakes and, if I use your review, cover up your username!

    Jul 9
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: 4. The First Class (Conqueror Rising)

    Thanks for explaining that, Book! And, Snoink, I have not read the first two chapters, but I defiantly should instead of starting this story in the middle. These two chapters ...

    Feb 14
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A God Named Sin | Chapter 2 Continued + Chapter 3

    Thank you! I'm currently reworking the whole book and I'll take all these into consideration as I do!

    Feb 14
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A God Named Sin 2nd Chapter

    Oh, okay then. I was scared because I never remembered writing a "banana" joke in this chapter. Thank you!

    Jan 21
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A God Named Sin 2nd Chapter

    You're making me nervous. What "bananas" joke are you referring to?

    Jan 21
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: ​A Mental Push And One Cut

    Your welcome! Glad I could help you remember that :)

    May 14, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A God Named Sin -- Chapter 1 -- Version 2

    Thanks for that review. I'm currently in the process of rereading my chapters to edit them and add/take out things. I'll make sure to take these into account.

    May 8, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Suffocation

    You're welcome! :)

    May 7, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A God Named Sin Prologue

    Nope, sorry that's not it. Good guess though!

    May 5, 2025
  • Poetry » Other, Narrative Re: 💬↔️🌳➕🌱

    This was really interesting. I showed this to my friend and we translated it in our silly goofy way of interpretating this. Thought I might share this masterpiece with you. ...

    Apr 28, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A God Named Sin Prologue

    Sorry, that's not it. Though the show looks interesting, so I'll watch it once I get my Netflix privileges back. Good guess though!

    Apr 28, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A God Named Sin Prologue

    Good guess on the inspiration. I have to ask though; what Netflix show do you think I got my inspiration from?

    Apr 28, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Gentle are the Hands

    I like this poem. It's short and sweet, and has a meaning that isn't all that deep, but also makes you wonder if there's another meaning to the poem. Keep ...

    Nov 20, 2024


Everything in the universe has a rhythm, everything dances.
— Maya Angelou