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  • Short Story » Supernatural, Spiritual Re: When Souls Become Demonic

    The concept here is definitely interesting, Abelgaiya, but there are a few things I need to mention. First, the dialogue between the characters is sub-par. It seems stiff and wooden, ...

    May 2, 2013


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