Schemilix

Works well as a song, seems like it could be well sung, but, as a poem, it lacks zazz. Not much I can say, other than I'm not too fond ...

Pleased to meet you. What part of the UK? I'm from the gorgeous Dorset of South England, and I spell just about everythung wuth u u. >_> Sodding Americans.

Chapter 1 - The Dusking Sun Between golden waterfalls of dusk light, a man who looked more ghost than human wove under eaves laden with ivy. As he limped through ...

*Reads through* *Taps chin* Rather good, actually. One thing. The rhyming. Wayyy forced. Fix it or drop it, that's all I can say. It's got this particular spark, this poem, ...

Oh, picked up a grammar error. The 'sneeks' should be 'sneaks'. Might be a typo, just pointing it out. Anyway. And the your should be you're. Anyhoowwww. Onto the poem ...

Hmm... Seems like a good verse to put in a song, but maybe not so powerful on its own. I do like the ending and first lines though, though the ...

Chapter 4 The man slid his unnervingly black eyes across in a sort of makeshift greeting and raised an eyebrow. Well, he could have been raising both but he wasn't ...

Little girls in your pants

You been at the caffeine too? Thanks for the welcome! Your eyes shall be spared!

Oh, didn't know that first part (25 review thing). Thanks very much!

As in the description, take any song title an put 'in your pants' on the end. EG: Smells Like Teen Spirit in your pants.

Hello to both of you! Thankyou for welcoming me, I hope I can live up to that, hahah. Non-fiction can be good, ever read Bury My Heart at Wounded Knee?

Chapter 3 His first sight of the palace was through flakes of snow. An occasional spot of white drifted down to blow away on Delkan's misted breath. Daring a glance ...

Oh, thankyou! I did think about that third person thing, I was getting around to labelling it as Delkan. *Cough* And yes, all the charries at the moment are 2D. ...

Hello everybody! My name's Schemilix here, just call me Schem. I'm a lazy bum, but i can't stop writing to save my life so there you go. I like fantasy ...