Scion

An interesting little story here, I especially liked the first two lines (alongside the title). They intrigued me and drew me in. Overall I thought it was very well written, ...

I really enjoyed this piece, especially the introduction. It might be improved slightly with a few more hints towards the nature of Reuben. One moment he appears to be a ...

You have the dubious honour of being my first review, so I hope you enjoy it :) I'll start with the dialogue, the conversation flowed nicley, not jerky or unnaturual ...