Scottylaa

I know this is a bit late (had a long time out). I'm going to be re-doing this story because looking back there are quite a few parts which I ...

Hey elfsongs. Thanks for the review! May I also ask if you could review my edited version of the chapter I released yesterday? It would be greatly appreciated. I will ...

And I dont know if it still applies but "The Rift" was capitalized because it is a location in the story. Sorry if this isnt clear.

Thank you for the review again. I love your support for the meaning of this story, it does mean a lot to me and who I am. I love the ...

Sorry. I couldnt think of a name to call my location for my story so I thought of Riften because to me it fit my idea that I wanted for ...

Im glad you asked me to read this. Its great. I would never of thought to make a poem which reads two ways both with different meanings. Its absolutely brilliant!

Thank you! I'll definitely read your poem. Might even review it if I have time.

Ah right I get you.

Also for the issue with the 'h' being capitalized I dont know what to do because I left it uppercase last time and someone said it had to be lowecase. ...

Thanks for the second review. I will make the small changes now. I cant believe I made them mistakes. It bugs me when I do that. Thank the maker of ...

Thanks for the review. I will make the changes just on this post so I dont use up anymore points on the chapter. Thanks for pointing out the grammar and ...

Thanks for the review! I have just about finished writing an edited version with added description and a little extra to the story but it generally ends the same because ...

Simple yet so effective

Thank you for reviewing! I'm happy about my chapter because the reactions I have gotten are far better than I expect and lack the negatives I thought they would have. ...

Thank you for the review and for the compliments. I'm completely blown away by the positives I've gotten from this, it's not what i expected at all and I've not ...