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Re: House of Haiku
Hey! Scribble here for a review. So first I'm gonna say that these are really good! Your writing is really mature and you have used a decent vocabulary. No grammatical ...
Aug 3, 2015 -
Re: Part One: Fall Fading
Gahh, last comment didn't work :/ Hey hey hey ^-^ Really liked it!. Short and simple, well written and some good description. I understood the characters anguish with not being ...
Jul 11, 2015 -
Re: My Fallen Angel {Chapter 3}
Hi, Scribble reviewing here :) So I really liked your story, kept me reading and interested. You write maturely and there are little grammar or spelling mistakes. However at some ...
Jul 11, 2015 -
Re: When you know
Wow, powerful stuff. That dudes an asshole. But yeah, really good, well written and cleverly thought out, giving a strong, intelligent story. Really made me feel something, which is important, ...
Jul 7, 2015 -
Re: Helium
Hi, Scribble again. Again this poem is very good, with an excellent vocabulary, lovely words. This poem has a nice little rhyme scheme which I like, it flows and generally ...
Jul 7, 2015 -
Re: An Audience
Hey.. So first off, it's great, I really enjoyed it and it kept me reading. What I personally interpret the red dot as is a camera, like, for security and ...
Jul 7, 2015 -
Re: Perfection ( EDITED)
I like this, very simple, honest and short. Brings the point across. I totally agree, nothing is perfect. I personally think the notion shouldn't exist. It creates standards we cannot ...
Jul 7, 2015 -
Re: Smoke
Hi, i loved this poem so much. Very contemporary and well written, some very nice adjectives and impressive vocabulary. The way I interpret it, is that this person clearly has ...
Jul 7, 2015 -
Re: A Smile's Worth a Thousand Words (part 1)
Hey, Scribble for a good ol' review! I really like this. It portrays the transition of an innocent young girl to popular, 'go with the flow' sheep, to put it ...
Jul 7, 2015 -
Re: Our Night In May
Hey! I liked this, it's simple and nicely written. With the punctuation, i see no reason for it to be wrong. Poems are whatever you want them to be in ...
Jul 6, 2015 -
Re: Pop punk song in C#
I really like this, it pokes fun at pop punk, which whilst i do enjoy listening to, i see where you come from. Just remember not all bands are like ...
Jul 6, 2015 -
Re: Cemetery Drive
Hey topkek :) I want to start by saying i really like this, had me clung onto it right to the end. Very dark I must say, but the way ...
Jul 6, 2015