SecretWolf

Hey, I loved your poem! It's powerful. On the first stanza, I thought it was hard to downshift from talking about roses, to "some" people who noticed that the roses ...

Your story is quite intriguing. I agree with previous reviewers however, a prologue would probably be a good idea to introduce a little of what's going on. You might start ...

This is an awesome idea. It sounds like a script for a screen-play though, am I right? A bit technologically difficult for theatre, I'm thinking. It would make an amazing ...

Your story is fascinating. Your perspective is interesting, and your character's curiousity about this woman is intriguing. It makes the reader curious about her too. I was a little disappointed ...

Nice Piece. Robert, Fred, and Cormac are solid characters here. Tommy's bounces a little. At first he seems like a stoic and solid, deep and forboding character. Which is good, ...

Hey, you've done well with your prologue. Your writing is very descriptive and visual. I'm wondering about the names of your characters though. You write of a grand battle, with ...