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Thank you very much :D

I'll try to work with more with Marea to make her more believable then ;) I've published the edited chapter one, and a new chapter, and I solemnly swear I ...

Hi! I have to say, thank you very much for sticking with the story, I really appreciate it. Well then, I'm glad you preferred this chapter and Rio. I do ...

This helped plenty more, thank you very, very much. I shall keep all of your advice and great ideas in mind and work on improving

Hahah, I know, I do that often as well XD You're very welcome, I hope it helped

You're very welcome ;)

Hi! Thank you very much for the review and the kind comments, I'm glad you liked my story Oh, and welcome to the site ;) Thanks again, and have a ...

Hi again! It seems this needs more improving than the first. Again, your ideas are very helpful and inspiring, I will keep them in mind. There are two reasons I ...

Hi! Thanks for taking the time to review! I will go through it again and fix the errors you've found (and I must say some are pretty silly...) and improve ...

Hey! Thank you so much for taking the time and effort to do this splendid review, it really helps a lot. I will keep in mind what you said about ...

I think you can keep posting them as "chapters", yeah. At the very least, you could use this as a very good writing exercise and the reviews would help as ...

That sounds perfect! It adds a lot :D

Hi! I'm glad you liked my work. Thank you very much for the compliments!

You're welcome, I'm glad I could help. I look forward to seeing the rest ;)

You're welcome! I'm glad this helped a little